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Monday, January 26, 2009

It was wonderful to meet you at Twin Tech III

How not to write a follow up email... presented without comment, for the moment :)


It was wonderful to meet you yesterday. I have attached [Company X] capability statement. I am looking to team with companies who require current and future IT solutions teams or staffing or networking within the government sector to connect people with great opportunities. Please review the information and please let me know how a can be of service. I look forward to hearing from you.

[name witheld]



Anonymous Anonymous said...

Please tell me that this is some sort of joke. I guess the good news is that when it comes to the competition for the few who know how to follow up, you can immediately differentiate yourself.

Here's my approach, feel free to criticize:

11:06 AM  

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